VLAWR202 WRITING TD : Simone RINZLER Original et pastiche

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VLAWR202 WRITING TD : Simone RINZLER
Original et pastiche
Source:
PEACE David ([2004], 2005), GB 84, London, Faber and Faber.
TEXTE ORIGINAL (INCIPIT DE GB 84 DE DAVID PEACE)
THE ARGUMENT
Electricity
Harsh service station light. Friday 13 January, 1984 –
She puts a cigarette to her lips, a lighter to her cigarette.
A dog starv’d at his Master’s Gate –
He waits.
She inhales, her eyes closed. She exhales, her eyes open.
He picks at the solid red sauce on the plastic ketchup bottle.
‘Early March,’ she says. ‘South Yorkshire.’
He rolls the solid red sauce into a soft bloody ball.
She stubs out the cigarette. She puts an envelope on the table.
He squashes the ball between his fingers and thumb –
Predicts the ruin of the State.
She stands up.
He shuts his eyes until she’s almost gone. The stink still here –
Power.
Simone RINZLER – Université Paris Ouest Nanterre UFR anglais - VLAWR201 DAVID PEACE & PASTICHE
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PASTICHE: À LA MANIÈRE DE… DAVID PEACE
THE ARGUMENT
Language
Light fading. Neck muscles howling with pain. Friday February 29, 2008 -.
She chews her nicotine gum, spits the gum, brings a mentholated cigarette to
her lips, holds the lighter. Crrr… - Crrr… She puts the unlit cigarette down.
She bites her lips. She retrieves the half-chewed gum. She puts it back to her
lips. She rolls soft and hard matter between thumb and index.
Chirp, chirp, chirp. Spring has started early.
He remains silent. Reads in silence. Stops reading. He waits. He goes up. Toing and fro-ing. Hall – garage - hall.
No time for rest. No time to relax.
Her master’s voice unheard of –
Time for lunch.
She types. Control Z: undo. Types again. Control Z. Undoes again.
Control Z – Control Z - Out of control. That won’t do. That won’t do. That
won’t do. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tapitty, tapppita, tappity, tap. Full stop.
That won’t do again. Hell! That will do!
“’ll be right down in a sec” she says. Types again. “Wait a mo- ‘m not over yet”
Types again.
Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tap. TAP. T – A – P.
Six to twelve. Time for lunch.
Why am I doing this? Why AM I doing this? Why am I doing this?
Language - Control
Creek. He goes back to the garage.
She throws away her tasteless stomach-rending gum. Disgust. Hate. Fear.
Creek. Back to the house. He looks for his electric saw. Finds it. Goes back to
garage. Door creeking.
Chirp, chirp, chirp. Spring. Lack of spring.
Why am I doing this? Why am I doing this? Why am I doing this?
WHY – AM – I – DO-ING – THIS?
Chainsaw whining outside. Zeeeoooing.
He’s doing it. Said he would do it. Is doing it. Has done it.
She types. Goes on typing. She’s doing it. She is undoing it. She is doing it.
She has not done it. She has not finished. Not yet. Wait. She has not made it.
Why am I doing this? Why am I-? Why -?
The lecturer goes on with her assignment. Pretends she likes it. Hates it.
Loathes it. Loves it. She’s done it. Over. To you.
Language - out of control.
Research – out of control.
Politics – language – society. Control: out of control.
Language – Control.
Language control.
Style.
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Source:
PEACE David ([2004], 2005), GB 84, London, Faber and Faber.
PASTICHE: À LA MANIÈRE DE… DAVID PEACE
TEXTE ORIGINAL (INCIPIT DE GB 84 DE DAVID PEACE)
THE ARGUMENT
THE ARGUMENT
Electricity
Harshe service station light. Friday 13 January, 1984 –
She puts a cigarette to her lips, a lighter to her cigarette.
A dog starv’d at his Master’s Gate –
He waits.
She inhales, her eyes closed. She exhales, her eyes open.
He picks at the solid red sauce on the plastic ketchup bottle.
‘early March,’ she says. ‘South Yorkshire.’
He rolls the solid red sauce into a soft bloody ball.
She stubs out the cigarette. She puts an envelope on the table.
He squashes the ball between his fingers and thumb –
Predicts the ruin of the State.
She stands up.
He shuts his eyes until she’s almost gone. The stink still here –
Power.
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Language
Light fading. Neck muscles howling with pain. Friday February 29, 2008 -.
She chews her nicotine gum, spits the gum, brings a mentholated cigarette to
her lips, holds the lighter. Crrr… - Crrr… She puts the unlit cigarette down.
She bites her lips. She retrieves the half-chewed gum. She puts it back to her
lips. She rolls soft and hard matter between thumb and index.
Chirp, chirp, chirp. Spring has started early.
He remains silent. Reads in silence. Stops reading. He waits. He goes up. Toing and fro-ing. Hall – garage - hall.
No time for rest. No time to relax.
Her master’s voice unheard of –
Time for lunch.
She types. Control Z: undo. Types again. Control Z. Undoes again.
Control Z – Control Z - Out of control. That won’t do. That won’t do. That
won’t do. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tapitty, tapppita, tappity, tap. Full stop.
That won’t do again. Hell! That will do!
“’ll be right down in a sec” she says. Types again. “Wait a mo- ‘m not over yet”
Types again.
Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tapitty, Tap. TAP. T – A – P.
Six to twelve. Time for lunch.
Why am I doing this? Why AM I doing this? Why am I doing this?
Language - Control
Creek. He goes back to the garage.
She throws away her tasteless stomach-rending gum. Disgust. Hate. Fear.
Creek. Back to the house. He looks for his electric saw. Finds it. Goes back to
garage. Door creeking.
Chirp, chirp, chirp. Spring. Lack of spring.
Why am I doing this? Why am I doing this? Why am I doing this?
WHY – AM – I – DO-ING – THIS?
Chainsaw whining outside. Zeeeoooing.
He’s doing it. Said he would do it. Is doing it. Has done it.
She types. Goes on typing. She’s doing it. She is undoing it. She is doing it.
She has not done it. She has not finished. Not yet. Wait. She has not made it.
Why am I doing this? Why am I-? Why -?
The lecturer goes on with her assignment. Pretends she likes it. Hates it.
Loathes it. Loves it. She’s done it. Over. To you.
Language - out of control.
Research – out of control.
Politics – language – society. Control: out of control.
Language – Control.
Language control.
Style.
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VLAWR202 WRITING TD : Simone RINZLER Original et pastiche

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